Thank you, Del, Draches, Malchios and Aspaheir for your coments its vary sweet of you.
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| Author: | Shadowdragon [ Thu Jun 30, 2005 9:54 am ] |
| Post subject: | Fire Burning |
The flower burns and never stops. Its black pedals never fall. It is never ending. It is the soul thing that keeps the dark soul living. It feeds him, it loves him. It will never stop its burning it will watch him and guard him. The dark soul will never know that the rose will never die. Yet he cries for it because he believes it is dieing, cause all the dark soul can see is the blackened pedals and nothing more. I am really sorry about how depressing it is. i just pulled this out of my collection. I thought that the Artworks form was looking a little sad with nothing in it. |
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| Author: | Aspaheir [ Thu Jun 30, 2005 8:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Hey |
Hey! Wasn't that EXX's old signature?! You can't just copy signatures like that! Cool poem though. It made me sob. |
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| Author: | Shadowdragon [ Fri Jul 01, 2005 8:48 am ] |
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yeah, but i had wrote it. It was on my AIM info. i wrote it one day to give it somthing. I also published under my name in my senior year in my year book before it was used as a signerture. so please don't get offended, i am just using my own work. |
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| Author: | Malchios [ Fri Jul 01, 2005 11:19 am ] |
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albeit lacks an iambic pentameter, it is an excellent piece...sad, but not TOO depressing. |
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| Author: | Shadowdragon [ Sat Jul 02, 2005 8:58 am ] |
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I like to write really late. Sometimes i don't even know what i have wroten until i wake up in the morning. It kind of freaky sometimes. |
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| Author: | Draches [ Sat Jul 02, 2005 8:25 pm ] |
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I like it. and all i write is depressed emotional stuff. yeah, but mine usually rhymes and has iambic pentameter. just cuz i don't like to read it if it doesnt. |
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| Author: | Delmerious [ Sun Jul 03, 2005 1:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | cool |
i have 3 words stylish,nifty, and well thought |
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| Author: | Shadowdragon [ Tue Jul 05, 2005 2:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: cool |
Thank you, Del, Draches, Malchios and Aspaheir for your coments its vary sweet of you.
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| Author: | + Silver - Orbs + [ Mon Aug 01, 2005 6:49 am ] |
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nice poem. very expressive |
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