Well, I thought you might have been refering to his comment at the top. I would consider that a nice piece. He's very good at expressing his emotions.

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Makla IS a turkey, no matter what he says. . .

Interesting very interesting indead you posess a talent man you need to stop sayin it sucks you write really well all i ever been able to write is that poem about blackbeard and even there it was based on another poem so i say you keep writing

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There is no greater honor than dieing in glorious combat with a superior opponent. *Thrust... thrust.... parry....sweep.....THRUST!! Good.* Ah the joy of a Boar Spear.