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| Author: | alondor [ Wed Dec 28, 2011 11:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Poem: Dawn |
This poem came to me around 7:38 tonight. While it is also on my Deviantart page I want yur guys' opinions as well When the moon's shadow dims When truth nears its end There you will find me Waiting for a new beginning |
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| Author: | Kojack [ Thu Dec 29, 2011 12:29 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Poem: Dawn |
I like it. It sounds like something that you would put in the end of a book that will become the first part of a series of books. It paints a picture. I can imagine a warrior of some sort (or some type of intelligent being) sitting on a cliff overlooking a forest at night as the moon goes down and the sun begins to rise. As if the warrior is starring towards their future wondering what lies ahead as they continue down this path that they call their life. Well that is what I gather from it anyway. |
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| Author: | Forgotten Dragon's Ire [ Fri Dec 30, 2011 3:49 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Poem: Dawn |
I think it sounds great. Just finished reading a series and that sounds like a perfect ending line. |
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