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 Post subject: Poem: Dawn
PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2011 11:55 pm 
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This poem came to me around 7:38 tonight. While it is also on my Deviantart page I want yur guys' opinions as well



When the moon's shadow dims
When truth nears its end

There you will find me
Waiting for a new beginning

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 Post subject: Re: Poem: Dawn
PostPosted: Thu Dec 29, 2011 12:29 am 
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I like it. It sounds like something that you would put in the end of a book that will become the first part of a series of books. It paints a picture. I can imagine a warrior of some sort (or some type of intelligent being) sitting on a cliff overlooking a forest at night as the moon goes down and the sun begins to rise. As if the warrior is starring towards their future wondering what lies ahead as they continue down this path that they call their life.

Well that is what I gather from it anyway.

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 Post subject: Re: Poem: Dawn
PostPosted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 3:49 pm 
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I think it sounds great. Just finished reading a series and that sounds like a perfect ending line.

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