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 Post subject: Re: Kroatone, the novel.
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 4:51 pm 
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well thank you kindly.

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sup kroa, long time no see and glad I could help you with your book. Can't wait to read your book.

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yes, that last batch really helped.

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update time!!!! Ok, so there are only three days of my school left which means I'll return to being active to this site. The book is going well and it appears I will meet my deadline. A brief side note, this has nothing to do with the book, but it will really help me out none the less

all I need you to do is go to
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it's fast and easy and earns me psn points.

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when exactly is your deadline if i may ask. :D I'm getting excited thinking about reading your book :D

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PostPosted: Fri May 28, 2010 10:04 pm 
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well, as far as writing the book, I intend to be done next week. Now when you throw in copywriting and publishing, were a little while off. Hey, but while I'm waiting for the cp's to be complete, I can egin writing a follow up. I plan to do at least 2 books in the series, could'nt fit it all in one book.


did you click my link????

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yep i clicked it :)
Well i can't wait to read it hope the cp doesn't take too long :D

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I'll tell you what friends, I'll make a little deal with you. I'll give one of you a copy of the original story if you can proofread it. That way you get to read it and I save money on hiring a professional to do it. Just a thought.

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YES YES YES YES YES.... :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!:












Yes i will proofread it gladly as was indicated by the above response... and review it as well... i promise not to be harsh

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well then, sounds like a deal. oh, and please do be harsh, the real critiqs wouldn't go easy on me. Don't get wound up yet though, it still has to be written, lol. I'll make an adobe file of it or something and sent it to you.

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I would but as you could tell FDI has too much enthusiasm for me to even dare get in his way lol.

(I duck and a battle ax that FDI throws at me misses and gets stuck in pillar behind me) – This is what I actually think would happen if I even try lol.

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no prob drake, with all of the names you threw at me, you have helped me admirably.

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well you could send it to both of us... multiple people can spot mistakes the others might have missed.

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yes, why not, you have both help with the book so much.

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Drakel can i have my axe back...
*Drakel looks above his head to see a axe quivering just inches above his head*

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*pulls out a pair of Xenogon Shredder* "Oh yeah, bet you haven't seen these before."

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ooh what are these *examines the Xenogon shredders*

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part of the creativity of my book was designing the Xenogon weaponry. It's not razor sharp, but jagged on purpose, brutal weapons built to Mame. The shredders are weapons that are strapped to an arm. They have two piercing blades extending 3 feet forward while half way down it's length a foot long curved scythe emerges from each blade. For doing what the name implies.

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maim but yeah :D they sound like really cool weaponry

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yes, very. Unfortunately they are not included with purchase of book. The blades are made of obsidian btw.

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maim but yeah :D they sound like really cool weaponry


damn, see why I need proofreaders??????

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yeah i can see why but you don't seem to have many problems so far except for the occasional misspelled word but we'll help

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yeah, well it doesn't help that my spell check is retarded, lol.Yes, there are many brutal weaponry I personally designed, even had a good friend draw me some concepts.

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cool... can we get some of those pics as well lol :D

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