What if i was to say that i wanted to try and write a story about some people whose father was killed in WWI and the brother of the two children must take care of his younger sister because she has basically lost her mind.
What if i was also to say that the reason the girl has lost her mind is because she saw their father killed(they lived in Bosnia and when the Germans attacked their father "got in the German's way" and was killed).
What if i was to tell you that i want the story to start out with how the girl is now (after the war is over) and how her brother takes care of her and then have it go back to before and including the day that their father was killed.
What if i told you that i would go through how they survived for a few years after their father's death until the brother was able to get them a place to stay.


would you encourage me to write this story?

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If you were to juggle a lion, and a house cat, the end result would look something like a tattered chunk of red fabric. The cat would scratch anything within reach, and the lion would just eat you. The lesson to learn? Make sure you eat your spinach.

Too many other stories have been done along this line. I know, because my sister has purchased each and every one of them. Other villians that are taken are the japanese, the russians, WWII, the Cold war, Vietnam...

If u do go ahead, PM me with the name so i can pick it up for her.

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The devil doesn't come dressed in a red cape and pointy horns. He comes as everything you've ever wished for.

-Tucker Max

i really like the sound of it actually i think its a good idea

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go on press the link you know you wanna
http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?akira%20dragonhalf

ok, well i'm going to continue writing it because if i dont one of my friends will kill me. she read the first part and really liked it and wants to read the rest. she bugs me every day about it so i constantly write. maybe i'll get most of it done by thanksgiving and ask some of my relatives about it.

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If you were to juggle a lion, and a house cat, the end result would look something like a tattered chunk of red fabric. The cat would scratch anything within reach, and the lion would just eat you. The lesson to learn? Make sure you eat your spinach.

oh when i first say this topic, i thought that you meant an RP forum. but as a story that you're writing by yourself. go for it. i'd like to read it too. so yeah, go for it.

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help me please?! please help me?!?!